To Whom It Concerns

By @kryschico14
To Whom It Concerns

A short book of poems to whom it concerns. Floral background found on Pinterest.

Chapter 1

Friend

I cry

You walk away

I offer

You turn down

I laugh

You scoff

I hug

You shrug

I ask if you are my friend

You stare

I ask again

Are you my friend

You walk away

I watch

You leave

I still watch

You are gone

Are we still friends?

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  1. astrid_hartman

    I like the contrast between how you are behaving and how this “friend” is reacting. Making each action its own line makes it that much more powerful, love it!

    I am currently writing a poem every day for the year of 2018 and would love it if you could give me some feedback on my work ๐Ÿ™‚

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  2. Lala_Land

    Omg! I love the poem!

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    1. kryschico14

      You’re so sweet ! Thank you !

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        No problem, anytime!

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