Technology

By @Zora_
Technology

This is just a poem i have writen. I’m new to thi website so critiques are welcome :)

Chapter 1

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Waiting…

Waiting…

For a reason

Reason to live

In a world

That it matters more

The number of followers

You have

Then the number

Of friends you have

Where the number of likes

You get in a day

Matters more then the support

You gain on your way

The time you spend

Online

More then you spend

With your friends

Family

Alone time

To much of it

you realize one day

we may

not know who

we love anymore

have less

friendships

though big

friend list

conversation

filled with abbreviation

why?

why do we do this

to ourselves?

no results found

System quit

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  1. Instant-Plots

    That was so deep, so true. Keep writing, dear.

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    1. Zora_

      Thanks so much ❤️☺️❤️

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