She's Still Broken

By @NyratOcnarFiD310748

She's Still Broken

By @NyratOcnarFiD310748

Hi! This one's kind of short, but also personal. Also, if you have any requests of a type of poem to write please let me know! I love writing but often it's hard to come up with good ideas. I would love to have some input. Thanks and enjoy!

Chapter 1

She's Still Broken

They keep throwing blades at her heart

And except it to still pump normally

They keep turning her smile the other way

And expect it to still stay curved

They keep forcing her down

And expect her to stay up on both feet

They assume she could never be sad

She’ll always be happy

They assume she can’t be cracked

As if she’s made of rubber

And not glass

But she can’t tell anyone the truth

She keeps being the pretend happy girl

They want her to be

Even though she’s

Still

Broken

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  1. Sirena_321

    Great poem…never let people see you crack. Keep your confidence up.

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  2. MysticalAlicorn

    your one of my favorite poem authors! you always have a topic that people rarely pay attention to and I love that!

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  3. gummiworms

    This is really good!

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  4. GoDucks10

    You are seriously one of the best at writing poetry! Have you ever written a haiku? I think it would be cool if you did a few of those all kinda related to the same topic!

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    1. starlightdreamer

      Yeah. Different forms would be interesting. If you’d like to check out and try some different types of poems, I have this really cool website I use called shadow poetry. I’ll attach the link: http://www.shadowpoetry.com/ or just go to shadowpoetry.com

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      1. GoDucks10

        I checked out this website and it looks really cool!

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      2. NyratOcnarFiD310748

        That’s an amazing website!! ty so much for sharing! 🙂

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    2. NyratOcnarFiD310748

      That’s a god idea! I will work on writing haikus thanks for the idea!! 🙂

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