Sacrificing

By @SaraAwadALmahri

Sacrificing

By @SaraAwadALmahri

Sadeem – Sara Awadh – Hebah – fuzia – Zahra Hussain HFK Group 5 13 September

Chapter 1

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Leaders sacrifice first, not go first. It is not about who stands upfront, but rather who faces danger first. For example, military fields are full of heroes who sacrifice their lives for their team and others, but do not forget that not every leader is labeled as so. Which means even when your father sacrifices his time and energy to provide you with food and a place to stay, it is a sign that he is a great leader. Now after realizing that, please understand that anyone can be a great leader, but it is not easy. It requires having the potential to allow others to cross the bridge first to the safe side.

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  1. Bubshait

    Your paragraph is amazing and meaningful , but I wish that you made it longer and organized your ideas a little more.

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  2. Manar_hu

    Nice writing , I love how you used military fields and parents as examples . Although I believe the paragraph lacks a hook, other than that I think it’s great .

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  3. ZahraYS

    I love how you started off with the paragraph, but the ending was a little confusing.
    Overall great ideas they only need a little organization.

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  4. Mayada200

    great examples, especially the one about parents and how they sacrifice for us.

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  5. amerah_2024

    Well written ! i really loved the examples that you included in your writing.

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