Chapter 1
An idea for a book
Eternal sleeping
The lifeless weaving
Where darkness shone in
Neverwake
Always dreaming
What’s believing
Scarlett seaming for
Neverwake
Waking giant
Life defiant
Passing by in
Neverwake
Parting souls
Wheres death to come
Oh loving’s gone so
Neverwake
aye_its_alana3
This is really good! Awesome job on this. I love it! Keep up the fantastic work and I can’t wait to read more from you. You are very talented!
Again, great job!
-Alana
CollisionOfFates
Ahhh, I didn’t post this earlier, but I realized that I have another piece of writing that might be better. Rising Darkness has more detail and is, in my opinion, better written (except for a comma that shouldn’t be there, ha ha). If you want to take a look at it- but only if you want to- that might give me a bigger idea of how to work on COF. (I’ll owe you after this, so I can give feedback on something of yours or whatever ya want. XD)
Thanks as always!
-*Alanna*
CollisionOfFates
*Grabs fog horn and blares it*
LISTEN UP, PEOPLE! ISAIAH’S DONE IT AGAIN! I REPEAT: HE’S DONE IT AGAIN!
Ahem. Dude, this is really good. Keep it up! XP
IsaiahDurrin
*bows*
Thank ye, thank ye, thank ye kindly.
CollisionOfFates
Ha ha.. That reminds me of those old-fashioned guys who read messages off of a scroll and say ‘Hear ye, hear ye.’
IsaiahDurrin
Hey, I know I said I’d have the first efforts of Riydan out here by now, and I’m really sorry but after thinking long and hard I ditched the project. I’ve realized that, though I can write well enough, I cannot plot a good story. After ditching the project I immediately bought a book on writing fiction and read it through. I will be buying more books that focus more specifically on plotting, and I will be starting to post short stories here, hopefully. I’m not giving up on writing, I just need to rethink how I do it. Hopefully you’ll get to see something cool out of me sooner than later. Until then.
-Isaiah
CollisionOfFates
Hey!
No problemo. You do what you need to do. If you ever need help or a confidence boost or anything, just lemme know! I think you’ve got this covered, though. 🙂
-Alanna