Neverwake | A Conceptual Poem

By @IsaiahDurrin

Neverwake | A Conceptual Poem

By @IsaiahDurrin

An abstract concept that I've come up with that I found rather interesting. I may write this as a book one day.

Chapter 1

An idea for a book

Eternal sleeping

The lifeless weaving

Where darkness shone in

Neverwake

Always dreaming

What’s believing

Scarlett seaming for

Neverwake

Waking giant

Life defiant

Passing by in

Neverwake

Parting souls

Wheres death to come

Oh loving’s gone so

Neverwake

Comments On This Chapter

Like
Like Love Haha Wow Sad Angry
6
Comment 7 Comments
  1. aye_its_alana3

    This is really good! Awesome job on this. I love it! Keep up the fantastic work and I can’t wait to read more from you. You are very talented!
    Again, great job!
    -Alana

    Please complete the required fields.



    Like
    Like Love Haha Wow Sad Angry
    1
    Reply 0 Replies Jul 7, 2019
  2. CollisionOfFates

    Ahhh, I didn’t post this earlier, but I realized that I have another piece of writing that might be better. Rising Darkness has more detail and is, in my opinion, better written (except for a comma that shouldn’t be there, ha ha). If you want to take a look at it- but only if you want to- that might give me a bigger idea of how to work on COF. (I’ll owe you after this, so I can give feedback on something of yours or whatever ya want. XD)
    Thanks as always!
    -*Alanna*

    Please complete the required fields.



    Like
    Like Love Haha Wow Sad Angry
    Reply 0 Replies Jul 7, 2019
  3. CollisionOfFates

    *Grabs fog horn and blares it*
    LISTEN UP, PEOPLE! ISAIAH’S DONE IT AGAIN! I REPEAT: HE’S DONE IT AGAIN!

    Ahem. Dude, this is really good. Keep it up! XP

    Please complete the required fields.



    Like
    Like Love Haha Wow Sad Angry
    11
    Reply 1 Reply Jul 7, 2019
    1. IsaiahDurrin

      *bows*

      Thank ye, thank ye, thank ye kindly.

      Please complete the required fields.



      Like
      Like Love Haha Wow Sad Angry
      1
      Reply 1 Reply Jul 7, 2019
      1. CollisionOfFates

        Ha ha.. That reminds me of those old-fashioned guys who read messages off of a scroll and say ‘Hear ye, hear ye.’

        Please complete the required fields.



        Like
        Like Love Haha Wow Sad Angry
        1
        Reply 1 Reply Jul 7, 2019
        1. IsaiahDurrin

          Hey, I know I said I’d have the first efforts of Riydan out here by now, and I’m really sorry but after thinking long and hard I ditched the project. I’ve realized that, though I can write well enough, I cannot plot a good story. After ditching the project I immediately bought a book on writing fiction and read it through. I will be buying more books that focus more specifically on plotting, and I will be starting to post short stories here, hopefully. I’m not giving up on writing, I just need to rethink how I do it. Hopefully you’ll get to see something cool out of me sooner than later. Until then.

          -Isaiah

          Please complete the required fields.



          Like
          Like Love Haha Wow Sad Angry
          1
          Reply 1 Reply Aug 8, 2019
          1. CollisionOfFates

            Hey!
            No problemo. You do what you need to do. If you ever need help or a confidence boost or anything, just lemme know! I think you’ve got this covered, though. 🙂
            -Alanna

            Please complete the required fields.



            Like
            Like Love Haha Wow Sad Angry

Similar Stories

Similar Titles