My mother ( Unit 3 / Group 4 )

By @Manar_hu

My mother ( Unit 3 / Group 4 )

By @Manar_hu

Group 4: Manar alhumaidan Reham bin Shablan Sara allinjawi Zahraa alghuzwi Khadijah alaskari Nouf almuheimeed

Chapter 1

    Being at a close age with my mother gave me a picture of how I should grow up to be a strong productive person. She got pregnant 

with my brother at a young age, and that sat more hardships for her. I gained a lot of memories when I used to see her suffer from all the hard work. 

     From a very young age, I used to always see my mom work hard to achieve her goals. One of my clearest memories that I have from my childhood is when I woke up in the middle of the night , and I was surprised when I found her in the living room studying while she was sick and pregnant in her last months. So I sat down next to her and asked her why do you study this hard while you’re sick ? She looked at me with her tired eyes and said, Obstacles should never stop me from achieving my goals and dreams. At that time I did not understand what she meant by that , and couldn’t realize what kept her motivated .

    When we passed that period of our lives, I always remember how much my mother sacrificed for us. Now I grew up knowing how to be patent. She did not give up on the first obstacle. And from now on i will not let small things stop me.

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  1. deemahaltalhah

    amazing story and so inspiring , mothers are a good example for their children

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  2. iinas15

    Great story I really enjoy it. It shows how much mothers are sacrificing for their children. Good job.

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  3. Rowa

    It is a very good essay.. great job

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  4. Manahel_al_awami5

    I loved the idea of writing about your precious memory with your mother but i think adding more details will make it even better

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  5. Haifa119

    You should make your ideas more clear but in genral its really good and well organiesd

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  6. SaraAwadALmahri

    It really inspired me. It’s organized well and ideas are clear. Great job.

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  7. lojainja

    I liked the idea but the way it was written could be rewritten in a better way.

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  8. shahad5567

    It is so inspiring to read Essays like that. It is obvious you did a great work on your writing. Keep the good work????????????

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  9. Elaf01

    You have done a great job . Your content is very clear and easy to read.As you said, mothers always sacrifice for their children.

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  10. Bubshait

    Great job girls !! you are very productive and I loved your essay, just a small comment I wish that you had a longer introduction and had more details in the body wish you luck 🙂

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    1. ZahraYS

      I love the content it’s very inspirational. I just wish you added a little more details I still feel I’m thriving for more information. Overall very good essay, I enjoyed it very much.

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