Lovely Night

By @Djackson1

Lovely Night

By @Djackson1

This story about a lovely couple who got married and their honeymoon turned into horror

Chapter 1

 Lovely Night 

Written by D’ante Jackson 

This story is about a couple named Melvin And Diana Jones as their Lovely Night Turns into Horror. The couple got married in Manhattan, New York and are now having their honeymoon in Miami Florida but before they make it there, they made a stop at a Motel called Countryside motel. They pulled up to the motel and got out of the car and went to the front desk. The place had cobwebs and old antic stuff in there. “I don’t know about this place babe” Diana said. “Don’t worry about it for just one night,” Melvin said. Melvin rang the desk bell and a man came out of the employee’s room. He was about 6’4 and was an elder and had glasses. “Welcome to Countryside Motel, my name is Samuel, how may I assist you.” Samuel said. “Yes, me and my wife would like to rent a room tonight,” Melvin said. “Of course sir we have one room available room 10 A top floor here are the keys, have a lovely night you two” Samuel said. Melvin took the keys and he and Diana headed up to the room. When they got in the room all the decorations were also antic just like the ones in the front lobby. “You sure about this place, babe” Diana said. “Is not so bad let’s get settled in” Melvin said. So the couple got settled in and Diana got in the shower after being on the long trip, Melvin joined in the shower with Diana and they started making out. During them making out the room phone rangs. “What the hell” Diana said. “Don’t worry I will go answer it” Melvin said. Melvin gave Diana another kiss and got out of the shower and wrapped himself with a towel. The phone was still ringing, he sat on the bed and answered the phone, “Hello” Melvin said. “Are you enjoying the room Mr. Jones’ ‘ Samual said. “Yes I am” Melvin said. “Good, my server will bring you and your bride a hot meal if your interested.” Samuel said. “Yes i’m interested I was gonna go to get something to eat but i will eat what you got.” Melvin said. “Coming right up sir.” Samuel said. Samuel hung up the phone and Diana got out of the shower. She was wrapped in a robe, she turned on the tv and the news was on, on the news it said that a couple has been missing, they have been missing for about 5 to 12 days, and police and detectives are still trying to find the bodies. “Wow that’s crazy I can’t watch this let me see what else is on TV.” Diana said. Diana flipped the channel and watched a reality show, Two minutes later room service knocked on the door. Melvin got up and answered the door and the server brought in the hot meal on a silver platter it was a burger and fries, the server was a tall overweight man he had a black hairnet and grease all over his clothes and apron and was breathing heavy. “Um how much do we pay you?” Melvin said. “Not at all sir enjoy(Growl).” the server said. The server left the room and Melvin took a bite of his burger. “This is good. I wish they brought ketchup.” Melvin said. “Yeah is good” Diana said. “Is so tender must be lean meat.” Melvin said. After they ate their food they went to sleep. 30 minutes later something woke them out of their sleep. They heard a scream like someone was getting mutalated. “What the hell was that” Melvin said. “I don’t know.” Diana said. Another scream happened, and Melvin got up and got his clothes on and went to check on it but his diana begged him not to go but he still went. When he got outside he saw a woman get dragged in the lobby, he snuck down to the lobby to see what was going on, when he got down there all he saw was blood that leads to the back hallway of the lobby. Melvin follows the blood trail and when he was doing the lights was flicking in the hallway he was shaking in fear. As he was following the blood trail, the lights went out luckily he had a lighter but had troubling flicking it on as he flick the lighter on he lift the lighter up so he can see but what he didn’t know is that the overweight server was behind him but he was covered in blood and had a big clever in his . The lighter burned Melvin’s finger and he dropped it, thankfully the lights cut back on if the lights didn’t cut back on he would have been dead. Melvin looked around because he felt a chill on the back of his neck but no one was there so he kept continuing down the hallway until the blood trail ended in front of the maintenance room door, he slowly opened the door and the blood led to some stairs. Instead of turning back he kept going, still shook in fear he made his way down the steps it was long as he kept going it was getting darker and darker and darker, as he made it down to the bottom of the floor he heard the woman screaming. He followed the woman’s scream and she was in a room getting cut up by the overweight server and feeding her flesh to Samuel. “What In The ******* Melvin said quietly. Melvin got closer without being seen, as he was getting closer there were eight cages full of people. It was the victims that were missing, including the couple that Melvin and Diana saw on the news earlier. The people in the cages were chained and tape mouth shut and some of them were missing fingers and tongue. The woman was still screaming after getting cut again. “Next we can get the couple that came in tonight and put them in these cages because i fed them the burgers already.” Samuel said. After he said that Melvin realized what he ate it was a human burger he ate, Melvin threw up and Samuel and the Server heard Melvin throw up. Then Melvin knocked over a mop and the Server saw him and started chasing him. Melvin took off up the stairs. As Melvin was running upstairs, behind them was the server who had his big cleaver and was chasing him with it “Oh my god ” Melvin said. Melvin was running as fast as he could upstairs when he got to the top of the stairs he ran out of the maintenance room and blocked the door with something so the server couldn’t get through. The server started banging on the door trying to get in but he couldn’t. Melvin took off down the hallway and saw his wife outside of the lobby. He ran up to her “Baby we gotta leave now,” Melvin said. Then the server broke out the maintenance room and chased after Diana and Melvin, they ran to the car she gave Melvin the keys. They unlock the door and start the car up until the server was by the passenger window. he broke the window trying to grab Diana, she was screaming as the server was choking her, Melvin put the car in reverse but the server still had a hold of Diana, Diana grabbed a pen out of the cup holder and stabbed the server in the left eye the server screamed and let the diana go and fell to the ground , then her and Melvin drove off. Melvin and Diana left their clothes and money at the hotel but they didn’t care because they were trying to get away as far away from that hotel, while they were driving to the police station a van was chasing them full speed. “What the **** don’t worry baby i will loose them don’t worry” Melvin said.“ Melvin sped up to lose the van but the van kept catching up. The van hit the back of the car bumping Melvin and Diana, Melvin tried his best to get away from the van. Melvin tried to swerve through traffic to lose the van but the van kept up. Melvin turned the car around a small street where no cars were on the road, Melvin could see they were almost at the local police station but the van came down an alley and hit them off the street the car flipped upside down. Diana and Melvin were knocked unconscious, Melvin opened his eyes but it was fuzzy what he saw was Samual and the server got out the van, and they grabbed Diana and put her in the van. A Fazed Melvin reached his hands out covered in blood and he went back unconscious. Three hours later he woke up in a hospital bed, A IV was placed in his arm and he was looking around for Diana, then a nurse and a doctor came in the room. “How long have I been here?” Melvin said. “For three hours now you had a nasty crash” the Doctor said. “How long am I from the countryside motel?” Melvin said. “Just about two miles.” the Nurse said. Melvin stood up out of bed and took the IV out . “Do yall have a phone here” Melvin said. “Yes in the lobby what you need it for.” The Doctor said. “To call my wife.” Melvin said. Later Melvin went to the front lobby and called the police and told them to head to the countryside motel as he told them that there was a kidnapping. Twenty minutes later several police arrived at the motel searching the whole place but there was nothing they could find even the way to the basement was not there. “Sorry for checking out your place we are receiving prank calls all the time, alright boys there nothing here just someone trying to create a diversion Sorry again.” the officer said. “No need to, you’re just doing your job.” Samuel said. After that the cops left and then Samual locked up the lobby and went back to the hallway and flipped a switch and the wall opened to the stairs to the basement. Samuel went down the stairs. back in the lobby Melvin came out of the vent of the lobby with a metal pipe that he found in the vent. He jumped down and was around the desk. Melvin saw a shotgun under the desk and grabbed it and put down the pipe. He way his way to the maintenance room but the lights flickered in the hallway and out of nowhere the server behind him melvin turned around try to shoot the server but the server grabbed melvin and slam him to the ground then kick the shotgun away from him then the server dragged melvin to the front of the lobby and smashed vase on top of melvin’s head. Then he picked him up and tossed him over the desk in the lobby the server went over to where Melvin was. Melvin sprayed a fire extinguisher in the eyes of the server then struck the fire extinguisher in the face then Melvin ran down to where the shotgun was. When Melvin picked up the shotgun, the server started charging down to Melvin. Melvin repeatedly shot the server eight times until he fell to the ground. Then Melvin walked up to the server’s face as blood was pouring out of the server’s mouth. “This is for kidnapping my wife,” Melvin said. Then Melvin blew the server’s head clean off and brains and blood and bones splatter everywhere in the hallway and on Melvin’s face. “That was severe for me those burgers Fat ass” Melvin said. he continued down the hallway to the maintenance room. Melvin ran down the stairs not wasting time and saw his wife strapped on a table he ran up to here and saw she was unconscious. As he was unbuckling her, out of nowhere Samual attacked Melvin with a knife by stabbing him in the lower back. Melvin screamed and woke everyone up that was in the cage. Then Samuel slammed him on the cage, Melvin dropped the gun by the cage. Then Samuel start bashing Melvin’s head multiple times on the cage and blood was coming out on the right side of his head until melvin elbow samuel in the stomach then he gave him a few punches blood start flying out of samuel mouth, then melvin uppercut him knocking him out then melvin grabbed the keys off Samuel and unlock the straps off Diana. She woke up and looked at Melvin and kissed him but stopped “MELVIN!!!” Diana said. As Melvin looked Samuel got back up and was about to kill him but Samuel was shot with a shotgun three times, two in the back and one in the head instantly killing him. He dropped to his knees and fell to the ground and died. Melvin and Diana looked and it was a woman in the cage that shot Samuel, she dropped the gun and everybody in the cage stood up. “We’re going to get you out.” Melvin. An hour later paramedics, fire department and police station arrived and helped everyone that was captured. Melvin and the others were getting treated for the wounds. “You did a good job Melvin after all these months of finding the victims. They were always in this motel the whole time, good work son,” the Police chief said. Then he shook Melvin’s hand. “You’re a hero baby but do me a favor” Diana said. “ Yeah,” Melvin said. “Take me home the hell with this honeymoon.“ Diana said. “(Laugh) Indeed I Love you” Melvin said. “I love you too,” Diana said. Melvin kissed Diana, after that the pair went back home to New York and never returned again. Everyone that was saved returned back to their families safe and sound and still talk about the trumantic time in that Motel. After a few years went by the motel was rebuilt and remodelled, the people that were checked in there will never check there again. Just like the old saying Once you check in you never check out THE END.

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