A poem that I can't think of a good title to!!!

By @Joyful17

A poem that I can't think of a good title to!!!

By @Joyful17

I can't think of a good title, so maybe someone could help me out?

Chapter 1

How deep and how wide?

Oh how long and how lasting?

Does Your love for me abide?

Can it cover my naked shame?

The sins that flow?

Does He truly know my name?

My heart, He knows?

Can it reach out,

When darkness shrouds

Can it find me

When confusion clouds?

Can it hold me fast?

As the waves tower high?

Can it, when the fire lasts?

When the desert runs dry?

Your love is as full as the sea

Larger then the sky

It overwhelms me

Brings tears to my eyes

That Someone could love me that deeply

Want me to the point of a cross

Treasure me completely 

When I am nothing but a loss

Marvelous and mighty!

Because your love has no end

It wraps me tightly

And You call me your friend.

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  1. Hermione_Watson_

    This is beautiful, and to me it seems like an Ode, but I’m not sure I want to name something as amazing as this, you should! Or maybe even no name?

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  2. NyratOcnarFiD310748

    I really like this poem! Maybe you can do “How Far?” or like “How Long” or something like that. Great job. 🙂

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    1. Joyful17

      I like it those titles! Thanks @NyratOncar

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  3. unikyky25

    So beautiful!
    Maybe something about questions and answers…?

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    1. Joyful17

      Thank you @unikyky25! I do love that idea!! Let me brainstorm some more, and (hopefully) soon I can edit it.

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  4. MissMiscellaneous

    I love this poem! Wish I could help, but I can’t seem to think of a good title either!

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      Thanks @MissMiscellaneous!

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