Inside is Evil

By @Youngbeautykj20

Inside is Evil

By @Youngbeautykj20

"Inside is Evil" is a story about A mother who desperately wanted kids and end up having twins that somehow got there birthday switch up. As they began growing Luis start hearing voices from the Whisper. The Whisper is out for revenge on the people who hurt Luis.

Chapter 1

Even the one we so deeply care about can be the devil in disguise.

 This story takes place in a modern day, 2019. It begins in June 6, 2006. Twins were born: A cute light skin baby boy with blue eyes named Derek Smith and a white baby boy with red eyes named Luis Smith. Luis was a different baby, I mean having a young mother (Tameya Smith Washington) who had promise she will do anything for babies. Some say she will do anything to have babies and if signing with the devil will help her then she will. Two hour later, Tameya was so happy to have not only one but two babies boys. She held Derek in her left and Luis in her right while her best friend Jelly Bean push her out the hospital. Tameya said bye to each of the staff in the hospital. Jelly Bean thought Derek was adorable. He was so light skin and amazing with heavenly eyes. She believe every baby was beautiful in their own way, even Luis was beautiful in his own way when he sleeps. Jelly Bean put Derek in his car-seat while Tameya put Luis in his car-seat. She went in the front and Jelly Bean drove them home. Arrive Home, Jelly Bean has been Tameya’s roommate since they were teens. Jughead comes in and out. Jugheads is Tameya Carriers, he the reason why she had Derek and Luis. Jughead is an white man with a manbun and talk so intelligent, you will think he actually graduate college than drop out. Jughead is Tameya crush, but he not ready to be in a relationship. He want to enjoy his life, not be tie down. Jughead help Tameya and her babies get settle in their place. He couldn´t stop holding Luis; there was something about Luis that caught Jughead eyes. Jelly Bean was taking care of Derek while Tameya rest. Ten day laters, Tameya got ready to go pick up the babies certificate from Milton Bill Hospital, also known as the Miracle place since three people survive gunshots wound. Jelly Bean was babysitting Derek and Jughead was showing Luis some of his guitar skills. At Milton Bill Hospital, Tameya was next in line to get her babies certificate. NEXT! Yelled Staff Makayla, the youngest black staff, Tameya step up. ¨Do you have your ID maám?¨ asked Staff Makayla. ¨Here you go maám.¨ Tameya handed her ID to the staff. Staff Makayla gave Tameya her babies certificate. Tameya glance to see if everything was about right and then she saw that on Derek birthday it change to 7/7/7, July 7, 2007. ¨Excuse me, uhmmm Staff Makayla my baby birthday wrong.¨ Tameya corrected. Staff Makayla completely ignore her like she didn’t even ask her anything.¨Ok that was rude.¨ Tameya added. Tameya just left before she makes an fool out of herself. As she went home, She couldn’t believe what happen to her and she wanted to tell Jelly Bean but Jelly Bean was to busy with Derek. She went to her room and saw Luis by himself asleep. Tameya hold him up and whisper to him, ¨Mommy will always love her dearest baby no matter what you are, always, always remember that baby, Luis always.¨ Then she put Luis in his crib. Nine years laters, Luis was playing in the snow while Jelly Bean prepare for supper and Tameya with Jughead in his room. Derek was playing hide n seek with some of his friends from school. Luis heard a whisper¨Get them son, all of them.¨The neighbor cats was walking on the fence when the cat turn around and growl at Luis. The cat suspect something wrong about Luis. Luis tease the cat; the cat ran while Luis chase the cat. Luis went to the garage and got a hammer. The cat slow down to see if Luis was still chasing it. Then Luis sneak attack the cat by choking it first then hit the cat with the hammer. When he was done he bury the hammer in the garage and stashed his gloves, roll up his sleeves and continue playing in the snow. The whisper came again,¨Good, Son.¨ Luis smile and started making a snow angel. When Derek friend,Miles Brackman, was running from Derek;he trip over the cat. He got up and saw the dead cat. He was so quiver. Derek went up to Miles.¨Your it, Miles what?¨ Miles pointed at the cat. ¨AUNT JELLY BEAN!¨Derek yelled with fear as he start walking back. Jelly Bean ran outside and saw the cat lying there. Tameya jump up and went to go check out all the commotion. Tameya ran outside with her robe on and Hello Kitty slipper while Jughead lay in bed smoking a cigarette. She saw the cats and told the kids to quickly come inside. Jelly Bean pause and saw Luis playing in the snow happily. Tameya turn and saw also. 9:00 midnight, Tameya and Jelly Bean start talking about what happen earlier.¨Tameya did you see that, he was just playing in the snow.¨¨Ḧe a little kid, we don’t know what happened to that cats Jelly Bean!¨¨But if it was Derek you wouldn’t be pointing fingers.¨¨That has nothing to do with it, we need to see what wrong with Luis.¨Tameya slam the forth in the ************, Jelly Bean there nothing wrong with my baby.¨¨You don´t know that Tameya,did you see how Luis reacted and how Derek, and what about that poor baby Miles,Tam- ¨What about Miles, so your saying Luis had something to do with it since he was playing in the snow, MINDING HIS OWN BUSINESS!¨ Tameya,please the kids are sleeping, there no need to feel some type of way.¨¨Feel some type of way,well excuse me Jelly Bean, but that my baby your accusing, and I will go beyond for them, I can’t believe you, my sister.¨Tameya walk away.¨Tameya?¨ Luis was in the corner listening to their conversation. Eight years Later,On a Friday.Derek and Luis was Seniors at the age of 17. Homecoming Prom was around the corner and Derek couldn’t wait to go with his queen,Aaliyah Charlotte. His girlfriend since the eighth grade. It was Luis time to show his true father what he was born to do. MarkWin Highschool news was on while the kids went to there locker to get ready for fourth period. Derek surprise Aaliyah from her locker. Aaliyah and Derek start talking.¨Hey baby, I´m stressing over Homecoming Prom and don’t forget we have a test for Mr.A class.¨¨That history right?¨¨Bae, yes we have the same class oh my god.¨¨I’m kidding, did I say your sexy when your mad.¨¨Don´t start Derek.¨¨Fine I’ll save it for Homecoming Prom.¨¨Boy, come here.¨ Aaliyah reach and gave Derek a kiss.¨Lets go to Mr.A class.¨Derek took his lady to her history class.In Mr.Moran Language Art class, Luis sits in the second row. Mr.Moran was teaching the kids about The Great Gatsby, when Joshua throw a spitball at Luis neck. Luis turn around and Joshua told Luis to meet him at lunch. Joshua was like every bully who think he can pick on the lesser kids;but not only that,he also Aaliyah half cousin. The bell rang,¨Alright remember for you senior, I want to see you guys bust out some moves on the dance floor and I will be supervising.¨The kids hurry to lunch. At lunch, Derek was talking about Homecoming Prom to his friends(Mark,Miles,Dre, and Trey), while Luis eats by himself. Luis was saving Joshua for later,¨It not time son.¨The Whisper said. After school, tomorrow is Homecoming Prom so the Seniors got out earlier. Luis and Derek start walking home and talking.¨Luis I´m sorry that I haven’t been there for you.¨¨Oh now you notice me.¨¨Hey don’t be like that,I always had your back since we was little.¨¨Yea,well I guess that change when we started high school.¨¨Luis.¨Luis began to walk fast ahead. At home, Luis was planning to get his revenge with the Whisper.¨You ready to teach all those who doubted you a lesson.¨¨Yes father, I´m going to make you proud.¨¨Very proud.¨Tameya was overhearing her son talking to himself. Tameya and Luis began to talk.¨Baby, who you talking to?¨¨Oh,just thinking out loud mama.¨¨Oh, so are you ready for Homecoming Prom?¨¨I guess, but are u ashamed of me mama¨¨Never baby, I´m always proud of you.¨¨Thanks mama.¨Remember baby Mama love you always.¨¨I love you to, mama.¨Ok now get to bed tomorrow your big day.¨¨Goodnight baby.¨¨Goodnight mama.¨Tameya shut the door while Luis went to sleep. Derek called for his mom.¨Baby it time to go to bed.¨¨But mom I can´t, I wanna make Aaliyah night special.¨¨Baby aaliyah love you for you, I bet it going to be the best Homecoming Prom of you guys life.¨¨Thanks moms, I’m trippin.¨¨Yeah tripping, now go to sleep boy.¨¨Ight goodnight mom.¨Goodnight baby.¨Derek gave Tameya a kiss goodnight. Morning, Derek and Luis went to Malvin Suit Designer to get their suit for Homecoming Prom. Luis went home so Tameya can help him out while Derek go out with his friends to get ready for Homecoming Prom. At Lilly Lady Salon, Aaliyah was getting her hair done for Homecoming Prom . All the Seniors got ready for Homecoming. All the womens wearing fancy prom dresses like Champagne Tulle, Burgundy, and Fancy Mermaid Two Pieces. While the Guys wear handsome suit like Tuxedo Rentals, Black Lapel Dress Suits, and Tuxedo Burgundy suits. At Tameya house, Derek and Luis was getting ready for homecoming while Jughead cuts some wood for the fireplace. Aaliyah and some of Derek friend(Mark,Trey,Miles, and Dre)met them at Derek house. Jelly Bean order a Teal Fancy Limos for Derek and Luis. Tameya took Luis and Derek pictures, then she took Derek pictures with his friends and his girlfriend. Jelly and Luis started talking.¨One more picture with all you guys, go on Luis.¨¨Ok, please hurry, Don´t want to be late for my big day Aunt.¨ Luis join the picture.They said goodbye to their parents and went off to the limo. Luis was riding in the front, while Derek and his friends ride in the back. They was having a party in that limos. Nothing can get in the way of there night. Or can it? Luis was having fun in the front as well.They were twerking,dancing and getting lit in the limos.They row down the window in the limos, each got a chance to climb in the window and feel the breeze. At Glamorous Kings and Queen Dance, They arrive to the Homecoming Prom. Mr.Moran along with Coach Zelson and Principal Medellin was waiting in front of the Great Yarmouth Hotel. Greeting all the Seniors and we also bump into our favorite counselor Mrs.Williams. Mr.Moran caught a couple of dummies trying to sneak alcohol in the dance.After greeting the staff they went inside the dance and Luis went on to himself. The dance was dope they was playing songs like Wanna be us- lil yachty, Mo BamBa, Live a Lil,and Backin it up by Cardi B. They even play a little old school I Love You For All Season, I Want Her, No Letting Go, and some Jacquees. They was grinding, slow dancing and having a blast at the Homecoming Prom. The Girl was looking boo’d up and the Guys looking daddyish at the dance. Luis was looking for Josh, then he finally found him with his friends and his girl Kenya Marshall,the popular girl in MarkWin Highschool. Kenya grab Josh to the dance floor. Luis watch Josh as he was slow dancing with his prom date. Josh whisper in Kenya ears and they begin walking out of the dance. Luis sneakily follow Josh and his date which was heading to the restroom. Josh was flirting at Kenya and try to get something out of her. She loves Josh, he really cute, cocky, different around his friends. She actually wanted to spend the rest of her life with her.Kenya started talking to Josh while he kiss all over her.¨Josh?¨¨Yes baby!¨¨Stop playing, but I actually love you.¨¨I–, until Josh could finish his sentence Luis came behind him and Stab Josh behind his back with a pocket knife.¨¨AAAAHHHH!KENYA RUNNNN! Josh yelled then turn around and Push Luis into the wall calling him a little punk. Kenya couldn´t leave him but Josh insist, so she hide inside one of the staff of the hotel room. Josh was fighting for his life leaving Luis a little bruise up, but that didn’t stop him. He soon put Josh in a chokehold and end up breaking his neck. He left Josh in the restroom cleaning his blood of the pocket knife and started searching for Kenya. Kenya try her best to not make any noise but it hurt her how she think Josh might be dead. She rip half her dress and found a broken class and began walking slowly. She reach the door up to the stair but when she try to open the door Luis grab her and cover her mouth. Kenya try hitting him, bumping her head into the back of his. But it eventually didn´t work and he end up slicing her neck with his pocket knife.¨There you go Son, now go get the rest of them.¨¨Yes father.¨Luis drop Kenya as she lay in the middle of the door by the stairway. Aaliyah and Derek was dancing the night away. Luis was coming after all those who did him wrong. There was no holding back.The Whisper wouldn’t let him stop. The more he kill the more angry he got with not only himself but with those who hurt him and made him do these bad things. He kill Jordan, the quarterback, Malcolm,one of Derek old friends.He even kill Josey who was Luis crush since the eighth grade. She play him and made all the football player laugh at him.¨Get out of there!¨The Whisper told Luis. Derek took Aaliyah to the back of the hotel showing her his surprise. They took a shortcut down the stair where Kenya was murder.Down the stairs, Derek open the door and Aaliyah went first.They both saw blood on the floor and stood Kenya body.¨AAAAAAAHHHHH!¨ Aaliyah scream. Derek took Aaliyah and they both went out the back window.Luis was finish,but he wanted Aaliyah, the girl who stole his brother from him and who chose his brother than him. Luis had a crush on Aaliyah when he was in the eighth grade but she wanted Derek. This lead him to like Josey. Derek went out first and when Aaliyah try getting out Luis grab Aaliyah legs. Aaliyah was screaming, then Derek got a rock and glance.He saw Luis, he couldn’t believe it. He got the rock and hit it at Luis hand. Luis quickly slice her in her legs but then drop his knife when Derek hit his hand with the rock.They ran from the hotels. Derek hid Aaliyah while he went back. Derek ran back and got the pocket knife:while he search to see if he see Luis in the broken window. He couldn’t find him, so he went back for Aaliyah. Aaliyah was limping, but Luis was behind them covor with blood. They went to the parking lot. Derek try hot-wiring the car while Aaliyah look out for Luis. Luis was coming. Aaliyah was yelling at Derek telling him to hurry up.It was difficult to work and hard to get it working. When Luis reach his way closer to the car, it finally started. Aaliyah hop in and put on her seat-belt. They drove fast like Usain Bolt. Luis try kicking the car with anger. Aaliyah was crying: her leg hurts.Derek and Aaliyah start talking.¨Baby it ok, we going to mom house.¨¨Why, what if he there.¨¨He not gonna touch my mom or any body ever again.¨¨Baby, we need to go get help.¨¨HOW AALIYAH, your limping and by time we get there he might get mom.¨¨BABY!¨¨Baby trust me.¨¨Ok,I trust you.¨Derek hurry home.At Tameya house,Derek ran outside the car and help Aaliyah out the car. They bam on the door as loud as they can,BAM,BAM,BAM! Tameya open the door quickly. Tameya and Derek start talking.¨What going on.¨¨WHERE LUIS!¨¨At the party, what going on,why is Aaliyah bleeding.¨¨He attack us MOM!¨¨WHAT,are u sure it was LUIS,how dare you-¨Aaliyah interrupted,¨Yes, he cut me Mrs.Smith.¨¨Derek included,¨¨Where Aunt and Jughead.¨Tameya was so shocked,¨Jelly Bean in her room and Jughead outside getting some woods.¨¨MOM, what if Luis out there.¨¨SIT,Luis is at the party ok, now let me help you out Aaliyah and stay here.¨Jelly Bean heard the commotion so she went out her room to check it. Derek and Aaliyah told her what happen while Tameya help Aaliyah with her cut. Outside, Jughead put on his earphones, put on some pop and start cutting down the woods.Then he heard something, he set his axe on the woods and went to go check it out. Luis came behind him and push him. Jughead back landed on the axe. Blood gushing out his mouth. Luis went out to the front trying to get in.Derek hurry and got in the front of the door holding the door shut.¨See Mrs.Smith, told you it Luis. Derek hold it long enough for they can hide. They hid in Jelly Bean room. Derek try holding the door. He told the girls to run for help as he distract Luis. Aaliyah didn’t want to leave her man. Derek and Aaliyah started talking.¨Baby,look you have to go.¨¨I´m not leaving you,Not with the devil himself.¨¨Remember when you say you trust me, well trust me.¨¨Baby.¨¨Shh I love you, I´ll be right behind you.¨¨I love you to.¨Tears running down her face, she kiss him and follow Tameya. Luis looked all over the house for them. Derek went under Jelly Bean bed and found her Revolver. He open the door looking for Luis. He search in the living.Luis and Derek started talking.¨Big brother, where your little thing at.¨¨Why you doing this.¨¨THEY TOOK EVERYTHING FROM ME, MY DIGNITY,THEY HURT ME!¨¨So killing them the answer.¨¨Father told me to, he quite the help.¨¨We don’t have a dad.¨¨Don´t say that he the only one who truly love me for me.¨¨I never ask you to change Luis.¨¨YOU LET THAT THING GET IN THE WAY!¨¨She has nothing to do with it.¨¨WELL!Your wrong big brother,now after I’m done with you, I´m coming after her.¨¨Don´t do that.¨¨Oh I will and there nothing you can do about that.¨ Luis came closer.¨Get back, please I don’t want to do this.¨Derek pleaded.The Whisper told Luis to get Derek. As soon as Luis step closer Derek pull the trigger and shot Luis in his heart. Derek started crying,¨I love you brother.¨ Smoke began coming from the ground. Fire came and then The Whisper grab Luis soul and send him under the ground. Derek move back, scared out of his life. Few hours the cops came. Aaliyah jump on Derek. Jelly Bean was holding Tameya while she cry over Jughead and Luis. The Ambulance took Jughead body and Luis. Graduation Day, before they started the ceremony they did a brief prayer for the one we lost at the Homecoming Prom. Mr.Moran gave the student there diplomas.They threw they caps in the sky.¨This for you Luis.¨Derek said out loud.Aaliyah kiss Derek. Jelly Bean and Tameya was proud of Derek but they won’t forget what happen. See even the one we so deeply care about can be the devil in disguise. The End

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