Decieved (Song)

By @sofiapierce3
Decieved (Song)

Here are the lyrics to the first dramatic song from the brand-new album, Fraud. It meanders into emotions of despair and a crushed hope which was a fantasy all along. What is your favorite line? (Comment below.)

Chapter 1

Decieved (Song)

It’s not the first I’ve been deceived…

But this has hit me hard, you see,

‘Cause I thought you were a friend, my friend,

And it turns out you won’t defend;

What’s ours.

You were always the shyer of us;

Never fighting, even when a must…

You let yourself be carried away,

And I never got a word to say…

I used to plod after you,

Wherever you went, I’d go too,

But I learned something new

That you never told me, who’s you.

It’s not the first I’ve been deceived…

But this has hit me hard, you see,

‘Cause I thought you were a friend, my friend,

And it turned out you won’t defend;

What’s ours.

What’s ours,

What was ours,

Was ours.

Me and you were not ever the same

You were more subdued, while I had flame,

I was the trigger to do most things,

I made an effort to not have it boring.

I used to plod after you,

Wherever you went, I’d go too,

But I learned something new

That you never told me who’s you.

Oh-oh, It’s not the first I’ve been deceived…

But this has hit me hard, you see,

‘Cause I thought you were a friend, my friend,

And it turned out you won’t defend;

What’s ours.

What’s ours,

What was ours,

Was ours.

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  1. SASHcanadaDUCKLING

    Great work! Yah, that would sound super nice with melody etc.!

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  2. unikyky25

    Yeah I can imagine! I’d love to hear the melody…too bad you cant post stuff like that on here!

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    1. sofiapierce3

      I know…I wish you could…Because I know it may sound odd just plain…

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    2. sofiapierce3

      Sorry for all of these replies, but I thought of something new when I just pushed ”Post Comment.” Can you tell me does it sound odd to your ears? (I can’t telll because I always read it with the melody!) Thanks for your reply!

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      1. unikyky25

        It doesn’t really sound odd because I can hear rhythms and stuff in there, like the backbone to the song. It’s cool!

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        1. sofiapierce3

          Thanks for you feedback;))

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  3. sofiapierce3

    Thanks. Also, the lyrics sound more natural with the melody!

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  4. unikyky25

    Beautiful! I’d say my fave line is “You were more subdued while I had flame” It’s very poetic! Nice work!

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