Counted (Song)

By @sofiapierce3
Counted (Song)

New season, new album, new opportunities, but along come new pain and heartbreak. Counted, the second song of the new album, is all about this seasonal heartbreak! What's your favorite line? (Comment below)

Chapter 1

Counted (Song)

Each time I see you

You stab me right through

You struck a blow

No fight now, oh-oh (no fight now)

You met me at time

Got taste for my crimes

I do it so poor

It’s why my heart’s sore (ah-ah)

I count the hours

I count the days

My hopes are towers

I want to say

I counted this,

I counted that

It weighed to nothing

It grew out flat.

But I counted (yeah ooh-ooh, I counted)

(I counted yeah ooh-ooh, I counted)

I counted (yeah ooh-ooh, I counted)

(Counted, counted, I counted)

I counted on you.

I’m getting so tired

My dreams have expired,

I come back right there

I do more than stare (more than, more than)

My eyes aren’t dry

They’re swollen, I cry

I need to move on

I’d rather be gone.

I count the hours

I count the days

My hopes are towers

I want to say

I counted this,

I counted that

It weighed to nothing

It grew out flat.

But I counted (yeah ooh-ooh, I counted)

(I counted yeah ooh-ooh, I counted)

I counted (yeah ooh-ooh, I counted)

(Counted, counted, I counted)

I counted on you.

Don’t go asking me

To run away (run away)

I’ve been counting, see

My heart is gray (oh!)

I counted this,

I counted that

It weighed to nothing

It grew out flat.

But I counted (yeah ooh-ooh, I counted)

(I counted yeah ooh-ooh, I counted)

I counted (yeah ooh-ooh, I counted)

(Counted, counted, I counted)

Yeah ooh-ooh, I counted

I counted, oh (counted)

I counted ( yeah ooh-ooh I counted)

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  1. ThatFishyNerd

    Wow! The lyrics are really beautiful. Whenever I try to write songs, I never find the opportunity to finish them. Anyways, keep up the great work 🙂

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    1. sofiapierce3

      Thank you

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  2. Joyful17

    Good Job! I try and write songs, but they just end up as poetry!

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    1. sofiapierce3

      Thank you…

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  3. unikyky25

    Nice work! You really have an art for lyric writing!
    My favourite line is “My hopes are towers”

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    1. sofiapierce3

      Thank you for commenting again and again on my songs…it’s quite encouraging to see that people read my work (although I wish they could hear the melody too)

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      1. unikyky25

        Yeah I bet!
        Are you making an album out of all these songs?
        If you don’t mind my asking, do you play an instrument to go in the background of these songs?

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        1. sofiapierce3

          I am making an album out the songs, and a separate one starting with my song Big Deal (https://www.getunderlined.com/writings/big-deal/) This song is in that album. I don’t really play an instrument; I used to play a flute-thing, but I don’t really play it anymore. (;I don’t mind people asking me questions at all!)

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          1. unikyky25

            Ok that’s cool!
            I write songs too, but my songs are usually Christian…

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          2. sofiapierce3

            Cool… Do you have music to go along with the lyrics? Or are your lyrics more like poetry?

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          3. unikyky25

            I play piano, so I try to arrange that to go with what I sing, but it doesn’t usually work. I need lots more practice!

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          4. sofiapierce3

            Yeah, I bet it takes a lot of practice…

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