A poem: The Kingdom of Stars

By @Goldensnitch45

A poem: The Kingdom of Stars

By @Goldensnitch45

Two people who read my first poem inspired me to write a second, to you two, I hope you like this one as well!

Chapter 1

The Sun and The Moon

In the land of darkness and shadow,

In the place where nobody goes,

Lives the Queen of the Night,

Who lives in a world of gloom,

Where not even her crown shines bright.

Her skin is as pale as snow,

Just like her jewels,

And the coldness of her heart.

Her eyes are ice,

Her clothing gray,

Everything here is dull in a way.

Her crown is silver,

Along with her shoes,

And not even in the grass is there one drop of dew.

The Queen liked her home this way.

Expect for the stars,

Which shone with a brightness that outshined even Mars.

Yes, she knew that Mars didn’t shine,

And she was glad of it,

It calmed her mind.

It seemed everywhere she turned was a reminder of the past,

Her reflection so perfect, it almost shattered the glass.

What tugged at her heart, no one knew.

Expect for her only family,

So different from the Lady of the Moon.

The Queen of Day was a far kinder soul,

With enough care for everyone,

Even a young foal.

It could’ve been Lady Night,

And then things might be set right.

But both Queens were cold towards one another,

Never wanting to be anywhere near the other.

And that’s how it has been,

Everyday,

Whenever they get close,

They always move away.

For that was the life,

Of the stars,

It was the life that they had built.

So much more different than ours.

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  1. Goldensnitch45

    Actually, yes, I have a couple of drafts and you don’t even really need to know constellations understand it.

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    1. Draculus-del-Viafat

      Okay, then. Let’s see what we can.

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  2. Draculus-del-Viafat

    This is really interesting. For me, it’s a new kind of poetry, and I think I’m liking it) And your character is interesting, too. Much deeper than she seems to be, isn’t she?

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    1. Goldensnitch45

      Yes, this poem is filled with a sort of mystery like element, like the Lady of The Moon and The Lady of the Sun, the reference I made to them coming together then moving away tells how they really actually do that in space. Ironic, huh?

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    2. Goldensnitch45

      Should I write more like this?

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      1. Draculus-del-Viafat

        Yes! I’m eager to read more of your stories like this one. Maybe, it’s a good idea to create a sort of book of legends and myths? Your style could suit it perfectly.

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        1. Goldensnitch45

          Hmm, I’m writing a story like that about zodiac constellations and other constellations like Andromeda, so would you like to help me with that?

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          1. Draculus-del-Viafat

            Eeehh… Actually, I doubt I’m good at astronomy) Maybe, I could help with story lines or characters if you have already made at least a few drafts or ideas to start with. Or even if you haven’t.

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    wow! *echo effect*

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