Still Hurts

By @rue_lourd

Still Hurts

By @rue_lourd

Chapter 1

I look down

the floor isn’t particularly interesting

but still, I

believe it to be preferable

to seeing you.

My vision blurs

my hands cover my ears

I look ridiculous

but this beats having to

listen to you.

My lungs shrivel

I can’t really breathe anymore

Oxygen won’t enter

I don’t feel safe here;

because of you.

I wonder when

my vision of you shifted

I guess that

best friends won’t always mean

“Best Friends Forever”.

Were you always

capable of destroying my trust?

Or was I

blind to the glaring faults

You’d always displayed.

My vision clears

I can see you properly

I see you

The ugly, disgusting, horrible you

The real you.

You probably didn’t

think I would be affected

Why should it?

You didn’t hurt me, but

it still hurts.

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  1. GoDucks10

    I can tell this is written from the heart and really shows how sometimes it’s hard to get over things. 🙂

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  2. Ciewilder

    I really liked this, great work! Your words really grabbed my attention.

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  3. GalaxyGemini

    A+ writing which hammers down right on those emotions!!

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  4. HPfan

    I love this!!! Great job:) Please keep writing!!

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    1. rue_lourd

      thank you so much! i have plenty more poetry up on my profile 🙂

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  5. NyratOcnarFiD310748

    Wow, I am so amazed and blown away by all of your writing! It has a big impact on me. Really really great job 🙂

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      thank you again! your feedback is really appreciated ^0^

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