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May 8, 2022

Hello there! I was wondering if anyone could give me feedback on my story (It’s called ‘When the Colours Clash’- only one chapter up so far, and it’s basically setting the scene), and if anyone would like for me to do the same for theirs? I’m rather new to the site, and would like to take this opportunity to get criticism from other writers! I would ask people at school, but I chicken out before I can. Thank you and have a good day!

-Book Nerd 🙂

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  1. L Mathews

    May 5, 2022

    Its amazing! Your writing style and the plot already pulled me in. I already enjoy the characters. Congratulations you are one of the authors who got me hooked on the first chapter!

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    1. Book Nerd

      May 5, 2022

      Thank you so much! I have one more question (😅) – Do you think that (what i revealed of) the plot line is cliche at all? I told my friend the entire plot line and she kept on insisting it was. Thank you again!

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